User talk:Dkpat/darkdawn

mmk guys, any suggestions now? The intro needs to be redone, but other than that I think it is good to go to replace the Dark Dawn article. Let's get all our thoughts out before I go ahead and do so out of excitement. :P ~ dkpat 16:16, 22 May 2012 (CDT)

Thanks for you to correct my errors first :-)

As the intro, I think we can imitate Golden Sun: The Lost Age, they are both sequels. However, GSDD has many differences with GS1 & GS2. Like new platform, character, 3D graphics, and 8 years for GS2. So I think we might use 3 paragraphs:

• 1 - Game's basic information and new system. Like GS2 article's para.1
• 2 - Plot and Setting. Like: The game take place after GS2... Character also are children of hero in GS1 ...
• 3 - Development, release and Reception. "Development" part also contain hoax etc.--221.11.26.238 02:53, 23 May 2012 (CDT)